Hey! Since Winnie has this great dichotomy between her outward artificial cheeriness and her hollowed-out personality — your sample gives a good idea of the former, but it'd be interesting to see how it plays against the latter.
Would you be okay, when you have a second, to either briefly describe (or write in character, if that's easier) how Winnie would react to:
— a cup breaking and sharply cutting her palm, when she is in attentive company?
— a cup breaking and sharply cutting her palm, when she is alone and confident she's not watched?
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Would you be okay, when you have a second, to either briefly describe (or write in character, if that's easier) how Winnie would react to:
— a cup breaking and sharply cutting her palm, when she is in attentive company?
— a cup breaking and sharply cutting her palm, when she is alone and confident she's not watched?